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Characters of Shadic; The bio's of my fan charries(No Shadic)
Topic Started: Jan 13 2008, 12:24 PM (782 Views)
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Name: Paradox
Nicknames: None
Age: ???
Height: Er...Sonic's height?
Eyes: Left eye is blue, right eye is red
Species: Hedgehog
Gender: Male
Fur: Left half of his body is all white, right half is all black
Clothing: Red cape that doubles as a cloak(It can cover his entire body)
Theme Song(If Sonic Charries can have them, why not MY charries?): Decadence by Disturbed
Appearance: Posted Image
I realize this pic sucks, but at least you get the general idea.

Enemy(s): Everyone who does not bow down to him

Best Friend: Himself, since he is actually two people(Para and Dox, twin hedgehog brothers)

Other Friends: ....You're kidding, right?

Neutral feelings towards: His Subordinates

Siblings: Himself

Likes: Death, mayhem, distruction, giving orders, being evil, inventing stuff
Dislikes: Heroes(Not the Tv show)
Strengths: Can split and combine. Since Paradox is actually two people,(Like I mentioned before, two hedgehog brothers named Para and Dox) they both have different powers. Dox, the black hedgehog, uses Dark Magic, and Para, the white hedgehog, uses Electricity. When in their combined form, Paradox, they can use both at once. He also is immortal and only dies of wounds.
Weaknesses: Since the brothers constantly bicker, they sometimes fight each other or get distracted pretty easily.

Weapons: Dox has a black staff he uses to use his magic, and Para sometimes uses a sword.


Personality: Dox is half crazed and acts before he thinks. He's also a bit dimwitted. Para however is a technical genius, and completely sane. He thinks before he acts. The brothers are basically the opposite of each other.


Bio: Paradox was born in an unknown place, in a small hospital. Unfortunately the stupid doctors there had started using nuclear energy to power their stuff, and when Para and Dox were born, the exposure to radiation mutated them, giving them magic powers and electric powers, plus the ability to combine and seperate at will. As can be expected the radiation also gave Dox brain damage and Para got smarter. One day Dox came up with the idea to conquer the universe. Para decided that using his amazing brain power, Dox's killer instinct, and their powers, this would be any easy task. And so that began their quest to become...Kings of the universe.




Name: Zero
Nicknames: None
Age: 17
Height: Same as Sonic
Eyes: Both dark blue
Species: Hedgehog
Gender: Male
Fur: All white.
Clothing: Leather jacket and jeans, and obviously shoes
Theme Song: Riot by Three Days Grace
Appearence: Basically a white sonic with a black leather jacket and jeans.
Enemys: I'd say everyone.
Best friend: None
Other Friends: None
Neutral Feelings Towards: Other villains
Siblings: None
Likes: Basically anything evil
Dislikes: Basically anything good
Strengths: He's cryokinetic.
Weaknesses: He's kinda stupid and a bit crazy.

Weapons: His powers, sometimes a gun, sometimes whatever else he can get his hands on.
Personality: Zero loves to commit crime. If he can get his hands on a weapon, you'd better bet he'll use it on anyone in his way. He, like Dox, likes to act before thinking.

Bio: Zero was once named Zachariah Jasonsworth, the worlds youngest hedgehog scientist. One day he was messing around with liquid carbonate, and he accidently combined it with a radioactive chemical and it was given a mind of its own. The radioactive carbonate then attacked Zachariah and froze him solid. Soon, the carbonate took control of zachariahs body. It turned his fur to ice, which is why its white, and completely seized control of his body. The carbonate named itself Below Zero, Zero for short, and since the carbonate had a tiny mind, it could be counted as insane, which led to Zero becoming a criminal.



Name: Techo (Last name unknown)
Nicknames: Tech
Age: 17
Height: Espio's height
Eyes: One is made of metal, and the other is yellow
Species: Chemeleon
Gender: Male
Fur: No fur, since he's a chameleon, but he is purple(He was gonna be green, but I just kept him purple for some reason)
Clothing: Jeans and a green shirt
Theme Song: Bleed it Out by Linkin Park
Appearence:Posted Image
Enemies: Actually none really.
Best friend: None
Other Friends: None
Neutral feelings towards: Everyone
Siblings: none
Likes: Meditation, being the best assassin
Dislikes: Failing to kill his target
Strengths: Super strength given by his robot arm, ninja skills, and optic bursts given by his robot eye
Weaknesses: If you deactivate his circutry, he's basically defenseless, because his arm is really heavy when deactivated.

Weapons: Kunai, Shuriken, his eye, his arm
Personality: Techo considers himself the greatest assassin ever born and is always glad to prove he is. All he really cares about is accomplishing his mission, nothing more, nothing less.

Bio: Techo does not know much about himself. He woke up in a battlefield one day, wounded and dying. When he was taken to the hospital, he lost most of his memory during surgery, except for knowing his name. He became reclusive due to not knowing who or what he was, so he began to take secret lessons to become an assassin. Soon he became on of the greatest assassins EVER due to his robot appendages.

Name: Maren
Nicknames: none
Age: ???
Height: Knuckles' height
Eyes: yellow
Species: Echidna, Nightmaren
Gender: Male
Fur: Purple with black rings on the dreadlocks
Clothing: Sometimes an outfit like NiGHTS'(The Journey of Dreams one), sometimes just a tee and some pants
Theme Song: In the End by Linkin Park
Appearence:Posted Image
His fists glow green when he punches. I dont know why, I just added that touch for no reason.
Enemies: Anyone who is evil
Best friend: None
Other friends: None
Neutral feelings toward: Anyone who is not evil
Siblings: None
Likes: Reading and solitude
Dislikes: Evildoers, people who interrupt his reading
Strengths: Can fly and has strong punches(Not as strong as Knuckles, but maybe half as strong)
Weaknesses: He gets tired after flying for maybe 15 minutes and must rest

Weapons: None
Personality: Maren dosent really like anyone. He likes to be alone and figures that having friends is a waste of time.

Bio: Maren lost all his memory after a serious skull injury. He was told by a Nightmaren he used to live with named Dayze(I hope thats not an actual Nightmarens name, I've never played the games) that he had gotten tired while flying about 50 feet in the air and he had fallen and hit his head on a large rock and broke his skull, causing memory loss. He dosent know why he is half echidna, and no one else knew either. He wants to find out why he's half animal half Nightmaren and will do anything to find out.

Name: Snarl
Nicknames: none
Age: 16
Height: Shadow's height
Eyes: Yellow
Species: Wolf(Werewolf)
Gender: Male
Fur: Brown
Clothing: A black tee and black pants both with dried bloodstains on them.
Theme Song: Stricken by Disturbed
Appearence: Picture Shadow with brown messed up fur, no stripes, and with a longer tail, claws, and fangs, and you've got it.
Enemies: Anyone who does good
Best friend: None
Other friends: None
Neutral feelings toward: His fellow evildoers.
Siblings: none
Likes: Killing and eating his victims
Dislikes: Losing a fight
Strengths: Uses a howl as powerful as a sonicboom. Its power is amplified on a full moon. And since he's smaller than a normal werewolf, he's faster.
Weaknesses: His killer instinct makes it easy to surprise him.

Weapons: His claws and fangs
Personality: Snarl is a bloodthirsty ruthless killing machine, but thats because he's a werewolf. He's also scheming, dimwitted, and faster than a normal werewolf. Plus unlike his werewolf bretheren, his goal isnt to turn everyone into werewolves...Its to rule the world.

Bio: Snarl was born in a small island where everyone is a werewolf(In LC's Worlds Apart RPG this place is a planet). It remains hidden because it is surrounded by whirlpools. Everyone who makes it onto the island never returns. One day Snarl got bored and attempted to leave the island. To his surprise, he escaped and wound up on land. Seeing what cities were like, he decided he wanted it all for himself.

Name: Beelze
Nicknames: Bringer of Hellfire(Ripoff of T-Bods name. lol, sorry LC), The Damned One
Age: ???
Height: Sonics height
Eyes: Blood Red
Species: Demon, hedgehog
Gender: Male
Fur: Scarlet
Clothing: Leather jacket, black sunglasses, black jeans
Theme Song: Let the Bodies hit the floor by Drowning Pool
Appearence: Picture a red shadow, with a devil tail, sharp claws, tiny horns behind his ears, and sharp teeth, and you've got it.
Enemies: Everyone that isnt a evil
Best friend: None
Other friends: None
Neutral feelings toward: Other evildoers
Siblings: None
Likes: Flames, killing, being evil, OIL(He DRINKS the stuff :blink: )
Dislikes: Good, water
Strengths: he's pyrokinetic and very crafty. Also, he can fly using his fire powers. Oil increases his power.
Weaknesses: His powers can be stopped temporarily by dousing him with water. Magic does more damage to him then normal attacks.

Weapons: A pitchfork(No duh), his claws
Personality: Beelze is PURE evil. He will do ANYTHING to get what he wants and kill ANYTHING in his way. He will stop at nothing to control everything there is to control...But other than that he's actually not that bad a guy.

Bio: Beelze is said to have been born from the fires of hell. He is basically the embodiment of evil, and he is literally a demigod.(Demigod of fire) Needless to say he was evil from the very beginning. He has lived almost as long as time has existed, and due to that he cant really remember too much about his past(He dosent remember where or how he was born so he says he was born from hellfire). He decided to rule the universe once he discovered there were sentient beings on the planets.(He never really payed attention, just wandered the galaxy aimlessly) The weird part is, even though he wants to rule the multiverse, he's actually a pretty nice guy, very polite...That kind of creeps him out.
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Holy crap, Paradox' colour scheme is extremely similar to my character Kai.
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He seemed quite peculiar standing there, a whole half of his fur being a deep black on his left hand side, whilst his right hand side seemed to hold fur of pure white. He also had mismatched eyes to match, having a red one on his black side, and a green one on his white.


But anyway, Paradox is quite cool, although quite cliche in some aspects.
Zero sounds kind of unfortunate. I'd hate to be him in summer...
Techo could do with a bit more info. You say he took secret lessons to become an assasin, but who from? And how did he find the person to teach him?
Maren I can't really comment on because I never played NiGHTs. I find it kinda strange that you haven't either yet made a character based off them.
However much I like werewolves, Snarls background as a werewolf just doesn't suit me. Sorry.
Beelze is quite stereotypical right down to the core. It seems kinda like you were just desperately grabbing out for an extra villain who's really evil.

I have to say, maybe instead of just haveing loads of characters who in all honesty you're probably gonna lose track of, you could combine some of the best and more original ideas from different characters to make less, but more original characters.
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Eh. I always thought NiGHTS looked cool but never bothered to play the games for some reason. But I read about it, so now I know SOME things, just not everything...
...Yes, I think that maybe Beelze is stereotypical, but I wasnt trying to get an extra evil character, I just came up with him and randomly scribbled up a backstory and the fact that he's like, super evil, because I couldnt really come up with anything better at the moment. If I told you who taught Techo, it wouldnt be secret, now would it?(Lame excuse, but I havent thought up everything JUST yet. I'll update the bio's when I come up with more.) As for Snarl...Hey, he's more cool now then he was before. He used to be partners with a MUMMY. How stupid is that?

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I forgot a charrie.

Name: S-mel
Nicknames: none
Age:???
Height: Emerl's height
Species: Robot
Eyes: Yellow
Appearence:Posted Image
Gender: None, but looks and sounds male
Fur: None, but he is colored Blue and green
Clothing: None, he's a robot.
Enemies: Evil guys
Best friend: Shadic(The feelings not exactly mutual)
Other Friends: Basically any good guys he meets.
Neutral feelings towards: Other robots, good or evil.
Siblings: He had a previous incarnation...He used to be named Z-mel, a remake of Emerl with the DNA of Tsurugi's character Zippo inside him. So I technically count them as brothers.
Likes: Action and excitement
Dislikes: Being bored
Strengths: He can copy attacks like emerl, and can transform into Extreme Gear
Weaknesses: He can be shut down.
Weapons: I plan on giving him an electric battle axe, because all he can do otherwise is copy attacks.
Personality: He craves adventure. He also tends to call anyone who's not a robot a Meatbag.
Bio: S-mel was built to be basically a robot who carries heavy stuff, in other words a delivery bot. But they gave him the personality chip of a fighter robot by mistake and he ran away from the company that built him, seeking action. He found it soon after, seeing Shadic fighting Zero. S-mel copied Zero's ice attack and temporarily blinded the hedgehog, saving Shadics butt. Since then, S-mel has followed Shadic around.
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BOH is still interesting, but seems very powerful, almost enough to completely unbalance a fight. Although I expect this is the point :D.
The problem is he has no true weakness. Yes water will negate his powers, but what about the character flaws (he's evil, so technically he's one giant character flaw, but still)? Will holy magic/energy deal more damage to him? That sort of thing will add more to the character.
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*Takes notes* Uh huh...Okay, I'd say magic would do more damage to him since he's a demigod. I'm still working out more stuff about him. I mean, I only invented him yesterday.
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Yeah I know. So long as the character isn't awfully unbalanced it works. And I know unbalanced. I coined the term. No Leviathans for you. :D
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I just remembered one of my fav fancharries. I'll post his bio now.

Name: Devlin
Nicknames: Dev
Age: 15
Height: Jet the Hawks height
Species: Falcon
Eyes: Green
Appearence: Um...Basically an orange Jet the Hawk with a sword and a mohawk.
Gender: Male
Fur: Feathers are orange
Clothing: Sometimes he wears a medival style chestplate if he's going into battle, and sometimes just a shirt and jeans...
Enemies: All criminals
Best friend: His best friend, Cyclone the Bluejay, was killed by a theif, which led to him becoming a hero...So, he has no best friend.
Other friends: None.
Neutral feelings towards: Shadic, because they're rivals
theme song: Headstrong by Trapt
Siblings: None
Likes: Chocolate Ice Cream(Not ripping you off LC, I came up with that a while back), swordfighting, fighting crime
Dislikes: Theives and criminals, fire, and cheaters. And strawberry ice cream.
Strengths: He's a good swordfighter and is pretty quick, plus his powers let him warp gravity.
Weaknesses: The more he uses his gravity powers, the more slow and tired he gets. He's also afraid of fire.
Weapons: A sword
Personality: Devlin is a cheerful person. But when you mention his best friend Cyclone, he gets really cheesed off.
Bio: Devlin was born in a small town, in a ghetto. He grew up next door with a bluejay named Cyclone. They became fast friends. One day when they were 13(It was Devlins 13th birthday actually) they were walking down an alley coming home from running errands for Cyclones mom, and a theif jumped out, stole all their cash, and slit Cyclones throat, killing him. Devlin was deeply depressed by this and swore revenge on all criminals. His dad, who when he was young, had been a swordfighter for sport, decided to help Devlins noble quest to rid the world of all criminals, and gave his son his sword and taught him to swordfight. Since then, Devlin has defended people whenever they needed it. One day he found an Ark of the Cosmos(Those ring things that warp gravity in Sonic riders 2) and took it home. He messed around with it and somehow activated a self destruct system. The ring exploded. Hit by the strange energy the ring used, Devlin absorbed it and gained the ability to warp gravity.
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Name: Igor Strongclaw
Nicknames: Kinslayer(He goes by this instead of his actual name)
Age: 19
Height: Blaze the Cats height
Species: Cat
Eyes: red
Appearence: He keeps his head wrapped in bandages for a reason he wont explain. All that is left visible is his left eye and his ears. He wears a black cloak most of the time too.
Gender: Male
Fur: Yellow
Theme Song: Tommorow by SR-71
Clothing: Black cloak, underneath that clothes that look like the clothes Ghost Rider wears(The NEW ghost rider)
Enemies: None...
Best friend: None.
Other friends: None.
Neutral feelings towards: Everyone
Siblings: All dead. He killed them. :blink:
Likes: Being left alone, fighting someone who is actually HARD to defeat
Dislikes: Weak opponents
Strengths: He's very smart, but not to genius level...
Weaknesses: His weak point is his right eye. Thats partly why its wrapped in bandages.
Weapons: A gauntlet with long claws like Wolverine's, that he wears over his left hand. He rarely takes it off.
Personality: Unlike most evil villains, Kinslayer is more of an antihero. He doesnt resort to crimes of any kind. He beleives that to be below him. Instead he fights all the opponents no one else is able to beat. He kills all his opponents, unless said opponent is a comrade.
Bio: Kinslayer is a villain from a childrens horror story, basically. A book was written about young Igor Strongclaw, who was said to have gone mad with power and killed his entire family. He was used as a way to keep little kids from going out after dark. No one beleived he was real...But the book was in fact a true story. Igor was a young 14 year old, and a child prodigy at using his weapon, the Claw Gauntlet. This was the weapon of choice for his family, because his family was a long line of warriors who used the gauntlet as tradition. Soon Igor realized just how powerful he was and began to fight his own family members. He won every time. Finally the power had corrupted him so much that he killed his entire family for being weak. He fled his home and began to plot what to do with his power. Eventually he decided to maybe rule the world. He didnt really care if he succeeded or not, but it was a way to show off his power and possibly meet some worthy opponents.
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This is a crappy pic of Devlin I made in Paint.

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And one of Kinslayer.
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I've heard legends of that person, how he traveled the land reducing all he touched to rubble
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Awesome. It took a while to figure out the Devlin one (he looked like a fox to begin with...), but they're still cool.
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